496 - The Thing You're Not Writing
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John and Craig discuss the projects they’re not currently working on. From the sunk cost fallacy to grudge writing, they offer advice for when you should rescue an idea from the Maybe-write list. We follow up on bad bosses, Ponzi schemes and answer listener questions about what to do when you have a crush on your producer. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig discuss which words they’d be willing to lose forever and the many interpretations of “Sure.” Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Apr 13, 2021 |
495 - The Title of This Episode
01:00:16
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John and Craig tackle the tricky territory of movie titles: what makes them great, why they’re important, and how a bad one can tank a good movie. We answer listener questions on writing diverse characters, surprising movie expenses, and residuals. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members Craig outlines how to behave in a restaurant. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Apr 06, 2021 |
494 - Screenwriting in Color
01:13:17
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John and Craig discuss the use of color in film by highlighting iconic scenes and sharing how they think about color palettes in their own writing. We then host another Three Page Challenge, this time focusing on how well these opening scenes set up expectations for the script. We now ask for loglines, which are kept secret from John and Craig! Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig discuss their Olympic ambitions. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Mar 30, 2021 |
493 - Opening Scenes
57:20
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John and Craig discuss the craft of constructing beginnings: what they consider when writing the first line of a script and how opening scenes have evolved with audience expectations. We also investigate a question from former producer Stuart Friedel and dive into the history of foreign levies. We then make predictions on the future of movie-going by analyzing the history of megaplexes. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members we look at cliches versus conventions. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Mar 23, 2021 |
492 - The Gray Areas
01:20:02
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John and Craig wade into the murky ethical challenges screenwriters face in Hollywood: When do you speak out against a peer? How do you claim an idea? Should you accept money from shady sources? They share their own experiences navigating these questions. We also follow up on female redemption arcs, NFTs, and joining the WGA. We answer listener questions on topics from ‘the director’s pass’ to creating personal websites. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig share their personal origin stories about the moment they decided to become screenwriters. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Mar 16, 2021 |
491 - The Deal with Deals
56:37
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John and Craig talk about writer deals of various types, including a deep dive into new data published by the WGA on feature writer pay. We also follow up on female redemption arcs and John shares his theory with Craig on how Disney will make its next trillion dollars. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, we wade into the discourse on writers tweeting about writing, and whether it’s okay to judge a line of dialogue. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Mar 09, 2021 |
490 - Secrets and Lies
59:57
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John and Craig investigate the cyclical relationship between secrets and lies. They discuss character motivations for lying and how the tension of a secret can hold a story together. To illustrate the discussion, John invites Craig to solve our first-ever How Would This Be a Movie mystery, the Case of the Fatherless Child. We also talk about the dreaded “why now?” note, the questionable wisdom of “you either have it or you don’t,” and whether we are team PRE-LAP. Finally in the bonus segment for premium members, we discuss travel and our plans post-pandemic. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Mar 02, 2021 |
489 - Kingdom of Cringe
01:10:53
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John and Craig tackle the growing mailbag to answer listener questions on writing uncomfortable scenes, options vs. sales, and portraying internet stories on screen. We also follow up on screenwriting structure and address what’s missing in text messages on television. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, we offer advice on living in small towns versus big cities. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Feb 23, 2021 |
488 - What Actually Happened in the Agency Battle
01:21:18
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John and Craig take a look back at the WGA-Agency campaign, revisiting the initial assumptions, what went right, what went wrong, and what lessons were learned. Then they finally decode the encrypted USB drive John handed Craig a year ago. We also follow up on social media and answer listener questions on cold feet and how screenwriters take vacations. In our bonus segment for premium members, we offer advice to our 20-year-old selves. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Feb 16, 2021 |
487 - Getting Staffed in 2021
01:08:09
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John and Craig debate best practices for writers looking to staff for television rooms–including whether you should be on social media and how to approach a showrunner meeting. We also take a look at the GameStop story and discuss whether and how this should be a movie. Then Liz Alper and Jamarah Hayner join us to discuss the impact of covid shutdowns on assistants. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, we share our awkward dating stories. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Feb 09, 2021 |
486 - Sexy Ghosts of Chula Vista
01:13:00
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John and Craig discuss how screenwriters use irony to build tension and texture, and why the term should be freed from its pedantic literary shackles. Then it’s another round of the Three Page Challenge, where we look at the first three pages of listener-submitted scripts ranging from multidimensional ghost stories to erotic pleasure principles. We also follow up on ethical female characters and why Craig left Twitter. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, we discuss money and the return on happiness. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Feb 02, 2021 |
485 - Unions and Guilds
01:08:05
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John and Craig explain Hollywood’s guilds and unions. They cover the history, the challenges, and their hopes for the future. We also look at character alignments and whether it’s helpful for writers to chart out their character’s traits. We follow up on eight sequence structure and mockable IP and Throughout the episode, Craig tries to solve the mystery of John’s sweet fingers. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members, we talk about the screenwriting guru turned Qanon leader. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Jan 26, 2021 |
484 - Time Lords
53:48
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John and Craig look at how writers manipulate time on macro and micro levels, and the impact of these choices on narrative. We then share our strategies for compressing, twisting, and trimming time in scripts. We also discuss continuous dialogue, subtext and which kinds of stories are best suited for animation. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, we explore which moments in time we’d choose to visit if time travel were an option. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Jan 19, 2021 |
483 - Philosophy for Screenwriters
01:07:08
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John and Craig discuss their personal philosophies and how writers can approach philosophical questions in terms of theme (central dramatic question) and character (moral codes and motivation). Then we cover virtual pitches and listener questions on eight-sequence structure and how to read a script. We also follow up on the agency campaign, failed insurrections, and bad IP. Finally in our bonus segment for premium members, we revisit our disagreement in episode 481 about whether it’s okay to lie. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Jan 12, 2021 |
482 - Batman and Beowulf
46:07
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John and Craig explore Batman’s strange and unique position as a fantasy of American frontier justice and how filmmakers have approached this IP. Then they invite author Maria Dahvana Headley to discuss the original Dark Knight — Beowulf — and why these odd heroes continue to resonate with modern audiences. We also answer listener questions on using pen names, whether the coolest plot can save a weak character, and John’s Eagle Scout project. In our bonus segment for premium members, John tells Craig about the Batman trailer he wrote 20 years ago and they discuss what heroes they’d like to write. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Jan 05, 2021 |
481 - Random Advice 2020
01:12:24
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John and Craig welcome back writer/producer Nichelle Tramble Spellman (Truth Be Told, The Good Wife) to share wisdom on listener questions that are interesting but unrelated to screenwriting. We discuss how to know if you’re marrying the right person, open relationships, and how to deal with being the ‘starter’ girlfriend. We also cover jealousy, laughter, the ethics of lying to the Red Cross, and disappointing Secret Santas. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members we discuss that Martin Shkreli article and how it would be a movie. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Dec 29, 2020 |
480 - The Wedding Episode
01:03:41
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Craig and John talk movie weddings with special guest Aline Brosh McKenna. We look at the tropes, the challenges and the unique opportunities wedding scenes provide. We also look at the agreement between the WGA and CAA, and answer listener questions about writing the weather and bombing a pitch. And in our bonus segment for premium members, we discuss our post-vaccination hopes and plans. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Dec 22, 2020 |
479 - On Losing A Parent
56:32
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John and Craig talk about losing a parent on screen and in real life, with a look at the emotional journey and some practical advice for navigating the experience. We also discuss updates to the Warner Bros announcement, tips for managing idea scraps, and answer listener questions about when to discuss paid versus spec writing and slow-to-respond producers. In our bonus segment for premium subscribers, we talk power, including Craig’s controversial opinions on nuclear energy and the staggering price drops in solar. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Dec 15, 2020 |
11 - How Movie Money Works, Rebroadcast
44:29
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John and Craig discuss the trend of studios releasing movies straight to streaming by revisiting an old discussion on movie accounting. We cover above the line and below the line costs, how distribution fees work, and why all this is important to screenwriters. Finally, in our newly recorded bonus segment we discuss the 2020 Macs and the future of computing. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Dec 08, 2020 |
478 - The One Hour Drama
58:46
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John welcomes writer-producers Dailyn Rodriguez (Queen of the South, Ugly Betty) and Chad Gomez Creasey (NCIS: New Orleans, Castle) to talk about writing network dramas and production during a pandemic. We answer listener questions on act breaks, politics on tv, and sustainable story engines. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members we discuss ‘ambient television’ and our favorite comfort-shows. Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Dec 01, 2020 |
477 - Counting Clowns
01:07:03
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John and Craig host another round of the Three Page Challenge. This week they cover how to use voice over, build suspense, and write alter egos for the screen. In follow up, we look at the day-and-date release of Wonder Woman 1984, updates in the WGA agency negotiations and of course the newly announced Uno game show. Finally, in our bonus segment for premium members we discuss autobiographies and what we’d include in our own. Thank you to all our Three Page Challenge participants! Links: Email us at ask@johnaugust.com You can download the episode here.
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Nov 24, 2020 |